March 22nd, 2007
Commentary on the news feature
It started with nursing schools. That was our topic. And from that, me and my groupmates to come up with the angle, The Impact of the Leakage Issue in the June 2006 Nursing Board Exam to the Different Nursing Colleges in Cebu City.
From that topic, I wrote a news feature, focusing (supposedly) on one angle, which is, where will the nursing graduates/ board passers be after what happened? It is (supposedly again) about the different paths those passers gone through after the exam and what would happen to other nursing graduates. Thus the title, Nursing Grad: The Path They Have to Walk.
I was inspired to make that title from the theme of the recent MassComm Days (MassComm Grad: Asa ka Padung?). Haha. I know it's silly but it fits my angle so I used it.
Hmmm. Since it's my work, I will criticize it entirely. Haha. I shall say that it's poorly organized. It comes along with my other tasks so I had only a little time to finalize it. Though I identified a certain angle, it seems that my article branched out into many other angles. Maybe it could have been worked out if I tightened the article but it's loosely-composed. I can't really identify if it has a poor substance because I put up several informations from our notes.
However, I think that it's informative, though. I cited several reliable sources. Though I fail to emphasize my angle, I think I have given justice to my title.
I still think my article could have been better with more editing and tightening. Rating? Good but unsatisfactory.

